Today Monkey and Little Teddy are going to the toy shop . "How are we going to get there"? asked Little Teddy to monkey." We are going by horse" said monkey. Little Teddy looked scared.
"What's wrong little Teddy". said monkey. "I don't know how to ride a horse" said Little Teddy. At nine o clock they were looking at the toys. "Look"! shouted Monkey. There were two bikes. One was blue and the other was red. Little Teddy began to cry.
"Why are you crying little Teddy,"asked monkey.
"I don't know how you ride a bike" said little Teddy.
I'll show you how" said monkey with a grin. So they bought the bikes and went to the park.
First put your foot on the pedal then sit on the seat,next start to pedal fast and don't stop. So Little Teddy did what monkey had said with monkey by his side.
" I'm doing it" said Little Teddy. He was so pleased he was doing it that he went home to tell mum.
Great writing Neve, well done.
ReplyDeleteNeve you have written a wonderful narrative.
ReplyDeleteYou have a 'Title'.
You have told us 'Where' and 'Who' is in he story.
You have written about a 'Problem' ie. Little Teddy and his anxieties.
You told us how you solved the problem.
I hope lots of people get to read your 'Narrative' Neve as this shows excellence in someone so young.
What great work Neve. well done. your a star
ReplyDeleteExcellent story Neve you're a great story writer! Room 1
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