Week 3

This week the children have been learning how to write a narrative in their draft writing books.

We began by looking at a series of pictures and discussed what was happening. I was delighted with the story language that the children came up with.

                               

                                           The Yellow Bus      

At home Lily and Josh painted a box yellow, and black for the wheels.

 It was too small so they painted another box then it was just right for the two kids.

                                                                                                                              Emily.

                                          The Yellow Bus

Josh painted a big box. He painted it yellow with black wheels. It looked like a bus.

Lily got into the box. She broke the box. Lily got a bigger box. She painted it yellow

 with  black wheels. Josh and Lily got into the box and they went for a ride in the

           yellow bus.              Alexis.

                    

                                         The Yellow Bus.

       

Lily and Josh painted a box and thet had to wait for the bus to dry. The box was too 

little so Lily and Josh had to find another box. Josh painted the box again. They got

into the box and it was just right for the two kids to play in.

                                                              Jaxon